1. Look at new and old trends in detection of skin cancers.
2. Look at new and old treatments in:
a. skin cancer
b. skin protection
c. skin protection (with in your body)
3. Explain my stories. Elaborate on my stories more, more detail.
Explain my story on the dermotologist (my visit)
4. Include more on UV radiation getting worse.
5. Work on in text citations
6. Correct grammar.
7. Interview my aunt on her skin story.
In my presentation, I would like to engage the audience emotionally so they understand my topic. By doing that, I will have together a zeega or possibly a Haiku Deck. I am going to also include good stories, and an interview if not a youtube video over dermatologist appointments. I would like to bring food as well such as Oj and chocolate because those help prevent skin cancers.